"OPEN"

Aug. 8th, 2009 06:36 pm
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TITLE: "OPEN BOOK"
FLAVOR: Criminal Intent
CHARACTERS: G/E
WORD COUNT: 76
RATING: k


Bobby slammed from Ross’ office, Alex on his heels.

“Bobby, calm down.”

“I just DON’T see how he can’t see what is plainly before his face.”

“Bobby, it’s plainly in your head, YOU have to explain it to him.”

“He’s an intelligent man, I don’t see why...”

Bobby,” she puffed her bangs up in frustration.

“Well, you don’t have any problem understanding my mind.”

“Yeah right, Bobby, you’re a friggin’ open book.”

Date: 2009-08-09 09:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lozziecap.livejournal.com
It must be frustrating sometimes, to be Robert Goren. "A brain the size of a planet, and they ask me to pick up a piece of paper .." *sigh*

Just as frustrating to be Alex Eames, and charged with the task of being some kind of conduit between Goren's Brain and the rest of the civilised world.

What you've written here seems to capture that perfectly for me.

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Date: 2009-08-09 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] basric.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading, understanding, and taking the time to comment. greatly appreciated.

Date: 2009-08-09 01:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bast2.livejournal.com
Yes. Exactly. What is so apparent to him is obscure to others. Great job.

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Date: 2009-08-09 07:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] basric.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for reading and commenting,

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