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basric ([personal profile] basric) wrote2012-02-10 12:48 am

WRITERVERSE CHALLENGE INJUSTICE

INJUSTICE
120 WORDS
ORIGINAL
RATING:G

Samantha walked in furious, “Our court system is a total injustice.”

Max looked up from his computer, “I take it things didn’t go as planned.”

She plopped down, “I was in the right. That woman hit me in the rear while I was stopped at a light. My attorney brought made her admit to putting on mascara, but this she was very pregnant and Susie homemaker.

Her attorney brought up a 1930’s antiquated law that states if a driver has nowhere to go and they rear end the car in from of them it’s an act of God. We had traffic coming towards us and beside us. She is not guilty.

“Baby I’ve told you being right doesn’t mean you get justice.”

[identity profile] kehlen-crow.livejournal.com 2012-02-10 08:46 am (UTC)(link)
What does it mean 'they have nowhere to go'?

Do you know of a law we now have? If driving is the only way someone can earn money (go figure how they figure that), their driver's license might not be withdrawn from them after a serious yet non-lethal (I think) accident they are guilty of. O.o

[identity profile] basric.livejournal.com 2012-02-10 06:01 pm (UTC)(link)
If every lane has vehicles in it and they hsve no choice but to crash no matter which way they turn.

[identity profile] havers.livejournal.com 2012-02-10 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Interesting read. I feel the boiling of Samantha.

[identity profile] basric.livejournal.com 2012-02-10 10:58 pm (UTC)(link)
That one was kind of auto biographical.

[identity profile] ami-ven.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 07:55 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice! I get the idea that you're really 'writing what you know' with this one.

[identity profile] basric.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 10:18 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks