WRITERVERSE WEEKLY DRABBLES X2
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Title: The Rain
Prompt: Rain
Word Count:134
Rating: G
Original:Summary: THE LOVE OF SOMETHING SO EASILY CHANGES TO HATE
She always loved the rain. Spring rains where she could sit on her porch and watch the rain march like soldiers through puddles, summer rains blowing against the window panes while she snuggled beneath a comforter. Autumn rains that cleaned the gutters of dead leaves and debris. Even the winter rains that changed to sleet she loved.
Then one spring, the rain continued steadily for two weeks and the dam had to be opened flooding the homes below taking away everything. So many memories swept away-- photographs of her children and their childish ornaments and art work, her grandfather’s mantel clock, the photographs of friends and family. What wasn’t swept away had been ruined by black water, sewage mixed with the rain. So everything was lost.
She hated the sound of rain. She cringed inside at the first splat.
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Prompt: secret
Word Count: 273
Rating: NC-17
Original:Summary: Secrets shared change over the years
WARNINGS: M/F, F/F, M/M/F, Drugs, drugged non-consensual sex mentioned
They’d been next door neighbors and best friends almost from the womb, their moms being best friends. It continued through grade school with girlish whispered secrets and through middle school where their whispered secrets became about their dreams of the future.
In High School secrets continued, Carrie whispered to Sandy when she had her first kiss and secretly showed her friend the proper way to French kiss whenever Brad got the nerve up to kiss her. That took another year. But as she shared her secret of her first kiss to Carrie, Carrie waved it away with the secret that Todd had taught her to suck his cock and she’d sucked Todd's friend Mark’s too—for practice.
Sandy was shocked. They had made a pledge as girls to remain virgins till they married and if Carrie was sucking cocks now her loss of virginity wasn’t far behind.
Carrie began hanging with a rougher crowd, only coming over to see Sandy so she could tell her things she knew would shock her. Like losing her virginity one night to Todd then letting two of his friends fuck her. About letting Todd fuck her ass while one friend fucked her mouth and another squeezed her tits.
They weren’t secrets anymore it was Carrie’s way of letting Sandy know she was a swinger and popular.
Sandy considered their friendship over. Carrie called her jealous.
The day Carrie called her begging and crying for Sandy to come to her house. Todd had made her do drugs. She was scared and Sandy could tell she was high right now. But she went to her old friend. They sat and talked and shared a soda Carrie laced with X. Carrie led her to her bedroom and held her. When Carrie began to kiss her she allowed it, Carrie needed her.
Sandy woke up in her own bed naked and confused with no memory of leaving Carrie’s house. Carrie just smiled when asked and said, “It’ll just be our secret.”
The next day she heard the word “Lesbo” throughout the day and at home she opened an attachment, sat in horror as she watched Carrie seduce her, take her virginity with a vibrator and fucked her ass. Then Todd and his two friends had her. It appeared she was an active participant though she'd long lost consciousness. Staging was everything for the camera.
Her mother found her dead with her bloody wrists hung over the tub.
Carrie was too busy to attend her funeral. Todd had decided to start charging his friends to have her.
Title: The Rain
Prompt: Rain
Word Count:134
Rating: G
Original:Summary: THE LOVE OF SOMETHING SO EASILY CHANGES TO HATE
She always loved the rain. Spring rains where she could sit on her porch and watch the rain march like soldiers through puddles, summer rains blowing against the window panes while she snuggled beneath a comforter. Autumn rains that cleaned the gutters of dead leaves and debris. Even the winter rains that changed to sleet she loved.
Then one spring, the rain continued steadily for two weeks and the dam had to be opened flooding the homes below taking away everything. So many memories swept away-- photographs of her children and their childish ornaments and art work, her grandfather’s mantel clock, the photographs of friends and family. What wasn’t swept away had been ruined by black water, sewage mixed with the rain. So everything was lost.
She hated the sound of rain. She cringed inside at the first splat.
II.
Prompt: secret
Word Count: 273
Rating: NC-17
Original:Summary: Secrets shared change over the years
WARNINGS: M/F, F/F, M/M/F, Drugs, drugged non-consensual sex mentioned
They’d been next door neighbors and best friends almost from the womb, their moms being best friends. It continued through grade school with girlish whispered secrets and through middle school where their whispered secrets became about their dreams of the future.
In High School secrets continued, Carrie whispered to Sandy when she had her first kiss and secretly showed her friend the proper way to French kiss whenever Brad got the nerve up to kiss her. That took another year. But as she shared her secret of her first kiss to Carrie, Carrie waved it away with the secret that Todd had taught her to suck his cock and she’d sucked Todd's friend Mark’s too—for practice.
Sandy was shocked. They had made a pledge as girls to remain virgins till they married and if Carrie was sucking cocks now her loss of virginity wasn’t far behind.
Carrie began hanging with a rougher crowd, only coming over to see Sandy so she could tell her things she knew would shock her. Like losing her virginity one night to Todd then letting two of his friends fuck her. About letting Todd fuck her ass while one friend fucked her mouth and another squeezed her tits.
They weren’t secrets anymore it was Carrie’s way of letting Sandy know she was a swinger and popular.
Sandy considered their friendship over. Carrie called her jealous.
The day Carrie called her begging and crying for Sandy to come to her house. Todd had made her do drugs. She was scared and Sandy could tell she was high right now. But she went to her old friend. They sat and talked and shared a soda Carrie laced with X. Carrie led her to her bedroom and held her. When Carrie began to kiss her she allowed it, Carrie needed her.
Sandy woke up in her own bed naked and confused with no memory of leaving Carrie’s house. Carrie just smiled when asked and said, “It’ll just be our secret.”
The next day she heard the word “Lesbo” throughout the day and at home she opened an attachment, sat in horror as she watched Carrie seduce her, take her virginity with a vibrator and fucked her ass. Then Todd and his two friends had her. It appeared she was an active participant though she'd long lost consciousness. Staging was everything for the camera.
Her mother found her dead with her bloody wrists hung over the tub.
Carrie was too busy to attend her funeral. Todd had decided to start charging his friends to have her.
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Date: 2012-02-05 08:56 am (UTC)Second one very hard hitting and so sad that a 'friend' can do that to another person.
Two great reads.x
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